I Will Graduate In 2012

Mr. Romero can you please grade me on my intro/conclusion and my voice.

Get off my back! I will definitely graduate in 2012, to get my family off of mine. “You better finish school and become successful, so that I don’t have to work anymore.” That’s something my mom always says. My family is my biggest inspiration. They always encourage me to graduate, go to college, and be successful.

My next step is college. Graduating from high school is the easy part. I would love to go to Harvard Law School, and since my family can’t afford it I have to work very hard. Scholarships will help me be able to go to my dream school. Harvard Law School would be an excellent source of education.

Secondly after graduating from college, I will be a successful lawyer. I have not decided what kind of lawyer I want to be, but I know I want to be known. I plan on never losing a case.

On the other I would like to further my success and become a judge. But not just any just any judge, I want to be a Supreme Court Judge, just like my idol, Thurgood Marshall. I did not want to be a Supreme Court Judge until I researched him.

In conclusion I will graduate in 2012 to make my family proud, to go to college, and be successful. I hope you do the same. Now I have to go study to reach my dream.